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question Writing a Game Review (9 comments )
by: Kessandra (691) | Posted in cluster AMD Contest Group
Posted 6 months ago ( edited 6 months ago ) in category DEFAULT

Writing anything that resembles a professional game review isn’t something that can be done in 10 minutes and forgotten right after. It takes time and dedication. This is a small guide to help anyone who wants to create a game review. Note that I am in no way a professional game critic, nor did I receive any extra education on the subject. I would just like to share some of my techniques and advice and hope that it’s helpful in any way.

1) Don’t be redundant. If you wrote something that is pretty self-explanatory then there is no need for further explanation. For example, “Supreme Commander is an RTS or Real-Time Strategy game where you take control of a set amount of units on the battlefield and wage war against the enemy by using strategy”. That’s completely unnecessary information, especially if it’s for a hardcore gaming website. “Supreme Commander is an RTS”, and then you add specific information about the game and not the genre.

It’s important that you make your review coherent and to the point. You don’t want to bore your readers. Instead of saying “Your character is easy to control by moving your mouse and hitting the WASD keys to move your character” you can just simply say “Enemy Territory’s control scheme is simple to grasp”. That’s much more pleasing to read and much more to the point.

Don’t write overly fluff material, such as descriptions on all the weapons and vehicles found in the game or an entire strategy guide. Just write about the weapons or vehicles that stand out from the rest that are noteworthy.

2) Don’t be vague. If you write “Command & Conquer is fun” then write about what makes it fun. If you write “I hate Lair’s control scheme” then explain yourself a bit more by adding “I hate Lair’s control scheme because it relies on the Sixaxis’ inaccurate motion sensors” or something like that.

3) Focus on the aspects of the game that stand out, whether it is for good or for bad. Don’t go off focusing on meaningless things and things that are taken for granted, such as “In multiplayer you can hit a key and a chat box opens up”. That’s nothing special. However, “In multiplayer, you can’t type to other players”, that’s noteworthy information because it’s an important standard feature that wasn’t included.

4) Use spelling and grammar checkers. It is important that your review can be read and understood. Don’t write like a 3rd grader and use complete sentences.

5) Read your review aloud. If you read it in your mind you can accidentally skip over important mistakes, whereas if you read it aloud those mistakes can be identified by your ears. Make sure you read multiple times. If you have a feeling that something isn’t right then something isn’t right. Sometimes it’s best if you just tear down the entire paragraph and start from scratch. Be sure to let others proof-read so that they may contribute any important input that you may not have thought of. Don’t rush your review.

6) Vary your choice of words. Don’t be monotonous and basic. You want your review to catch a person’s attention and be entertaining at the same time. You can do this by being witty or funny, or write the review in alternate ways. Don’t make your review “Doom is an FPS. Doom is fun. Doom has 17 levels. Doom is scary”, write it like “Every second of the 17 levels contained in Doom is a heart-pounding shooter-fest where enemies may lurk in any corner, ready to scare your pants off…”

7) Try to put yourself in the shoes of a person who has never played the game but is interested in it. What do they want to read? What information is important to them?

This is just some advice from an amateur reviewer who has a lot to learn herself. I hope it helps a little.

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Click to view McStu's User PageI am an AMD Agent McStu (113)  Talk to McStu in the Shout! Box I am an AMD Agent Nov 08, 2007 - 01:12 pm
Hehe I probably should have read this before writing mine! :)

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Click to view mr.wielder's User PageI am an AMD Agent mr.wielder (831)  Click to view mr.wielder's User Profile Talk to mr.wielder in the Shout! Box I am an AMD Agent Nov 08, 2007 - 12:18 pm
Good post!

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Click to view Droniac's User Page Droniac (108)  My XFire username is: Droniac Click to view Droniac's User Profile Talk to Droniac in the Shout! Box Nov 08, 2007 - 07:16 am
Nice entry, should be helpful for people new to writing reviews. I just write reviews in one go, with firefox 2 as my spellchecker, and hit publish after one quick read through to fix the sentences that don't flow well.

One quick comment on pointer #1 though: for most games it doesn't matter whether you talk about any of the vehicles or weapons, e.g.: Counter Strike, F.E.A.R., Medal of Honor ; but there are exceptions! A review of a game like Quake or Unreal Tournament most certainly requires an overview of all the weapons, even if it's just one quick sentence per weapon, otherwise I definitely wouldn't consider it a good review.

Anyway, aside from that a great entry.
Good luck in round 2!
Link: http://www.gamedrone.net

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Click to view Kessandra's User PageI am an AMD Agent Kessandra (691)  My XFire username is: kessandra Click to view Kessandra's User Profile Talk to Kessandra in the Shout! Box I am an AMD Agent Nov 08, 2007 - 09:03 am
Of course, but for AMD contest reviews where you can't really exceed 500 words its necessary to do some heavy editing. I'm just saying not to go crazy and giving long-ass descriptions and guides on how to use the weapons and vehicles present in the game and only do so if there are some truly exceptional cases.

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Click to view Droniac's User Page Droniac (108)  My XFire username is: Droniac Talk to Droniac in the Shout! Box Nov 09, 2007 - 04:47 am
I meant it as a pointer for normal reviews, but yeah for a 500 word review you definitely don't want to mention too much regarding the weapons and vehicles. It's more important to talk about the gameplay itself. :)

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Click to view exe3's User PageI am an AMD Agent exe3 (354)  Talk to exe3 in the Shout! Box I am an AMD Agent Nov 05, 2007 - 05:11 am
thanks, that helped me alot! :D

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Click to view J1n's User PageI am an AMD Agent J1n (6)  Talk to J1n in the Shout! Box I am an AMD Agent Nov 03, 2007 - 06:21 am
well it is 500 word restriction. my initial review for EfBB had over 600 words and terrible pacing. i feel like i fixed the pacing in the re-write to make it less than 500. i suck with punctuation though, even reading it aloud doesn't really help. :(

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Click to view Kessandra's User PageI am an AMD Agent Kessandra (691)  My XFire username is: kessandra Click to view Kessandra's User Profile Talk to Kessandra in the Shout! Box I am an AMD Agent Nov 03, 2007 - 06:56 am
Practice makes perfect. English isn't my first language and I seriously sucked at it but after a lot of practice and dedication it improved. Its not too hard, you just have to have the will to do the best possible review you can make and that includes taking as much time as necessary to do so.

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