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| Matrix Blog Link » /matrix/blog.asp/28327/123 |   FS-Lyle (160) Feb 21, 2007 - 02:48 pm » Edited on Feb 21, 2007 - 02:49 pm
| | Good opinion piece with historical perspective. Some fact and figures to back up your many assertions would have made this a much better article. I questioned many of your points, wondering where you got your facts from. Also, some pics would have been good to jazz things up. You could also use an editor: you have a tendency to construct elaborate run- on and often grammatically incorrect sentences. However, you have a solid voice. Good work. Flag this | Edit this post |
| Matrix Blog Link » /matrix/blog.asp/11053/122 | FS-Lyle (160) Feb 21, 2007 - 12:59 pm
| | Very well written. The only complaint I would have it that it is maybe a bit general. I think you could rework the article with some more technical examples and benchmarks to illustrate your points. Then it would be a 10 for sure! Flag this | Edit this post |
| News Link » /news/newsarticle.asp?searchid=14243 | FS-Lyle (160) Feb 20, 2007 - 05:22 pm
| | Considering how many talented designers there are out there who are under-employed, $1000 could potentially produce some very good work. At $75 an hour for a decent designer, we are talking about 13 hours of work. In my experience, this is more than enough time to produce something good. Flag this | Edit this post |
| Matrix Blog Link » /matrix/blog.asp/5093/65 | FS-Lyle (160) Feb 11, 2007 - 11:37 pm
| | Really good effort for a 1st time video review! Aside from what everyone else already mentioned, your review could have benefitted from using graphics to outline your major points. Flag this | Edit this post |
| Matrix Blog Link » /matrix/blog.asp/61864/56 | FS-Lyle (160) Feb 10, 2007 - 10:37 am
| | I don't think you went into enough detail for the FS audience, made apparent by the (lack of)length. However, I did enjoy your writing style which was fresh and engaging. You definitely show some promise, just put some more effort into the next one! Flag this | Edit this post |
| Matrix Blog Link » /matrix/blog.asp/21503/14 | FS-Lyle (160) Dec 15, 2006 - 07:28 pm
| | Thanks for showing Pongky. I can't wait to get there, this will be my 3rd trip to vegas for CES...sin city is probably the best place in the world for a biz trip (duh), if only for the fact that a couple rounds of blackjack in between meetings beats grabbing a coffee. And then there is all the excessive partying on someone else's dime...in fact, I can't imagine going to Vegas and having to actually PAY for everything :) Flag this | Edit this post |
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