Rather than clutter the article with passionate sentences full of emotion, you've presented the facts in a way that leaves no room for ambiguity, or puffs up the statements with fluff.
Regardless of how one believes on the subject of indie gaming, you've presented an arguable defense for Indie games.
I enjoy the use of questions to hook the reader, giving us a little taunting taste of the thesis for each paragraph.
All in all, I would say this is an excellent article. Flag this | Edit this post |
