|Rather than clutter the article with passionate sentences full of emotion, you've presented the facts in a way that leaves no room for ambiguity, or puffs up the statements with fluff.|
Regardless of how one believes on the subject of indie gaming, you've presented an arguable defense for Indie games.
I enjoy the use of questions to hook the reader, giving us a little taunting taste of the thesis for each paragraph.
All in all, I would say this is an excellent article.
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