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| Cluster Shout Box Link » /matrix/cluster.asp/56 |   J1n (6) Nov 24, 2007 - 08:24 pm
| » i need it the most.
...The specs of the rig are crucial to my plans for world domination by triggered responses created through visual forms of hypnosis and subliminal messages Flag this | Edit this post |
| Matrix Blog Link » /matrix/blog.asp/61804/725 | J1n (6) Nov 03, 2007 - 06:21 am
| | well it is 500 word restriction. my initial review for EfBB had over 600 words and terrible pacing. i feel like i fixed the pacing in the re-write to make it less than 500. i suck with punctuation though, even reading it aloud doesn't really help. :( Flag this | Edit this post |
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